MANAL+ALMAYOUF

=Hi Manal, good luck in the exam Friday. Here is the final draft of your Graph Description.=

= = The graph shows the number of exercise machine breakdowns between January and July in 2009. Overall, there was a steady fall in exercise machine breakdowns from thirty three machines in January to 14 machines in July.

= = From January to March breakdowns rose gradually from 33 to 35 machines. Then, between March and April there was a dramatic rise in the number of broken down machines from 35 to 75. There was a sharp fall in damage to almost 33 machines from April to May. During the period between May and July there were the lowest number of breakdowns, with only twelve machines. However, in July there was a minimal rise of the figure to 14 machines. = =

= = In conclusion, breakdowns rose sharply in the period between March and April, and then continued to decline in July.

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= = = Hi Manal, hope your preparations for your writing exam are going well. You have done very well with your practice writing and homework. Remember to follow the essay structure (intro, para 1, para 2, concl.) and not write too many paragraphs. Your thesis statement has been corrected so please read it again. = = = = Many people think that study at on-line learning websits better than set at classroom and learning from teacher. However, other people want to go to school, meet other students and make many conversation with other. They want to develop themselves and discuss the lessons with other students and with their teacher. This essay will show two reasons why on-line learning is better than learning in a classroom. =

= Firstly, in my opinion the main reason is people can found different learning websites. In fact, people can choose the website as they like, but at school they cannot select a specific teacher. Also, websites allow to people to select different activities, for example: reading lesson or listening to it. Moreover, they can to compares between websites, which the best one to their study. =

‍secondly, I think on-line learning is easier than study at classroom. People can learn more when they study online, they can fix their mistakes by themselves. Also, they feel more comfortable in their home than when they in classroom. They do not have to wake up early in the morning, they just study wherever and whenever. ‍Thirdly, the beautiful reason for studying on-line is the most websites is free. The students do not have to pay a lot of money to learning. In addition, many websites are very good to explain to students, their have a nice ways to help students to understand.

‍In conclusion, I believe that on-line learning is the best way to learn any thing people want to know. In addition, on-line websites are easier and more comfortable than other ways to learn. There are many interesting websites for different age such as kids websites. People have the knowledge at their fingertips.


 * __ P16 Write a short paragraph stating who you agree with 80 words __**

I agree with the digital revolution in the classroom topic, because I think it is important to use, handle and it provides useful ways to improve learning. The student can do more lessons at home or in their free time. Also, some people cannot go to school or university, but e-learning allows them to learn wherever and whenever. In my opinion technology is good for students because they have to learn by themselves. It is a fun way to learn. The student can do amazing things with technology. Sometimes, I agree with One revolution too far topic. Because some students waste their time in the internet: play games or chatting. At the end, we should to use the technology by the right ways and use the useful websites.

I will write about Jose Sanchez and his school days. He is a singer. His latest album is School Days. He studied in small high school in his country. His school had only one hundred students. Jose was not a very good student. His favourite subjects were music and science. He was very interested on their subjects. His favourite teacher was Mr Harrison, he was taught maths to the class. Mr Harrison got Jose interested in music. He had many friends in his school. The best friend of him was Don Vargess. He remember the end of school, when he and his friends stand on stege out door and about 15 dogs came around them and started howling! Other students could not heard Jose and his group, they started laughing!
 * __ P25 Write a summary about Jose __**


 * __ P28 Write a summary about yourself __**

My high school was in Riyadh where I lived with my family. It was big and beautiful. It had a lot of trees and garden in the front of the building of school. It was organised. My favourite subjects were history and science, because my teachers were so friendly and interesting. They always interesting me to the subjects in their classes. In my high school I had many kind friends. I spent a great time with them. I really miss that days!

1- Riyadh has Kingdome tower is the most famous in K.S.A. 2- The capital of S.A has 2 highest towers in the city. 3- Riyadh has the oldest building in the city named ALMASMAK. 4- The capital of S.A has the largest and biggest female university in the Arabic world.
 * __ P58 Write 5 sentences about your city __**

1- We send the plans to clients. 2- We give to the clients an estimate. 3- The client gives an answer to us. 4- We send to the council the plans for approval. 5- We take the plans to the builder.
 * __ P65 Rewrite sentences __**

One of traditional house types in my country is the mud house. They are beautiful and they are strong enough to stay for hundreds of years in some places. They are made of blooks of mud, stones and wood. In the past people used palm fronds or grass and some wood to made the roof. The weather in my country is hot in summer and cold in winter, so the people had to spray the walls with water to keep rooms cool. There is a suitable place to make small fair in special room and people can setting around the fair in winter. The houses are square shaped, next to other houses and organised in to lines. It can to be two floors maximum, different sizes with coloured wooden doors and windows and small mirrors on the door. In fact, these days people like to build one outside mud room in the modern houses, which makes the house beautiful.
 * __ P22 Write an email __**
 * __ P33 Write a story __**
 * __ P69 Plan and Write a paragraph __**


 * __ P72 Write a paragraph about your dream house __**

I would like to write about my dream house. I would like it medium, beautiful, modern and classic house with large windows. Also has medium swimming pool and big garden in the front of the house. I would like it in the city, everything around my house to be more comfortable if I want something. I would like it outsaid colour is beige. I really looking for that in the near future.

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