Rita

The graph shows how many exercise machines broke down each month from January until July 2009. Overall, there was a moderate fall in exercise machine breakdowns from 33 in January to 14 in July.
 * Hi Rita, good luck in the exam Friday. Here is the final draft of your Graph Description. **

From January to February, there was a slight rise in the number of breakdowns and gradually fell to around 35 breakdowns in March. From March to April, the number of breakdowns increased rapidly from 35 to 75. April had the highest maintenance jobs in this period. Between April and June, the number of breakdowns decreased sharply from 72 to 12 breakdowns and it was the lowest figure in June. However, in July there was a slight rise to around 14 breakdowns.

In conclusion, the number of exercise machine breakdowns fell between January and July 2009.

My name is Charida Jedtanameth. My friends called me "Rita". I came from Thailand. I'm Thai. Before I came to Melbourne, I lived in Bangkok. It's the capital city but my hometown is in the south of Thailand. There are five people in my family. My parents, one older brother, one older sister and I. When I lived in Thailand, I graduated with a bachelor’s degree of Art. My major is Fashion design. I worked for one year before I came here. I'm a sportswear designer. When I lived in Thailand I liked to go out with my best friends. We liked to find a good restaurant in which to meet, eat, drink and talk. We used to have a good time. I'm very happy when I spend time with my friends. I feel bored when I stay home alone, but not always because sometimes I want to live alone. When I stay home I like to surfing the internet for Facebook, chat, and find something interesting. It's a good time for relax.
 * P10 My profile **


 * P16 Write a short paragraph stating who you agree with 80 words **

I agree with "one revolution too far" because nowadays, computers and technology have become important in our life especially, Teenagers waste all their time surfing the internet because the internet is an easy way to receive news, update information and communicate with your friends. But if it used too much, it is not useful for everyone because they just stay in front of the computer for chatting, playing games and surfing the website. They are not interested in anything around there. So, it isn't a good instrument for support and improvement. However, It depends on you. If you know how to use it, which it good or bad because it can help and hurt you in the same time.


 * P28 Write a summary about yourself **

When I was young, I was studying at a school for girl in my country. Since I was elementary untill a senior high school. I'm not a very good student. While the teacher was teaching, I will always talking or eating with my friends. Sometimes I will take a nap in the classroom. I didn't concentrate about the lesson because I don't like to learn and lazy to do homework. So, At the time of examination, my test results was not good and I always fail. I don't like Maths and English subjects. I think, it's very difficult and hard to understand. I never pass the exam about this subject. Furthermore, My school has an annual sports event and I was a volleybsll player. I really like it becasue it's made me enjoin and spend more time with friends. It created harmony to each other. It also made us healthy and use of leisure time as well. By the way, I have many friends but only five peoples are my close friends. We can talk and discuss everything. When someone is suffering, we will always beside together. We were friends untill now. I love them so much.

**P33 Write a story**

I will write a story about my experience. It's not how to learn about ride a bicycle or something like that but it was the story can help me change my mind and


 * P58 Write 5 sentences about your city **

1. Wat Pha Kaew is the oldest of all the temple in Thailand.

2. Bai York Tower is the highest building in Thailand.

3. Siam Paragon is bigger than Siam centre.

4. Siam square is the most popular shopping centre for Thai teenager.

5. The clothes at Partoonum is cheaper than Central world.

**﻿Plan :** The traditional Thai house.
 * P69 Plan and Write a paragraph **

**Details :** a lot of space and verandas, the air flow and good for people who love natural.
====The traditional Thai house is a unique style. They have different characteristics and design based on history and culture. They usually have no electricity and are made from wood. People can see them around the countryside of Thailand. They have a lot of style but the most common characteristic of a traditional Thai house is high ceilings. It will overhead about forty centimetres for free ventilation. Furthermore, it can provide safety from animals and bandits at night time. It helps and protect from flooding and space under the house can be storage of farming equipment. The roof is high and slanting. it made from earthenware tiles. They have a lot of space and verandas. So, the air is very flow and people can stay here. It's very comfortable and ideal for nature lovers as well. ====

Jose Sanchez was studying at small high school in the country. There has student only 100 students. When he was studying, he wasn't a very good student because he didn't concentrate about the lesson. He just think about the music. So, his favorite subjects was music and science. The favorite teacher who got him interested in music is Ms. Harrison. She had a red hair and taught Maths. Jose had many good friends but Don Vargess was his best friend. He had a lot of memory when he was high school. Now, he is the singer. And he has own album, it's name "schooldays".
 * P22 Write an email **
 * P **** 25 Write a summary about Jose **


 * P65 Rewrite sentences **
 * a. ** we send the plans to the client.
 * b. ** we give the clients an estimate.
 * c. ** The client gives an answer to us.
 * d. ** we send tha plans to the council for approval.
 * e. ** we take the plans to the builder.


 * P72 Write a paragraph about your dream house **

My dream house is live in the beautiful and quiet place. Around that house have a lot of trees and not far from there I can see the beach view. When I get up early in the morning, I can see the sunrise and I can see the sunset in the evening too. It’s the romantic time with someone special. Although, my house is all around the nice natural but it very conveniet and comfortable. My dream house is the medium size. It’s decorate modern style and made from concrete and glass. They just have two levels. They have three bedrooms, three bathrooms including toilet, one kitchen and dinning room and the big one living room. On the top floor, they have a big verandas. Inside, my house have more thing facilitet and modern. I have one dog and one cat. So, I have a backyard for them and for myself to invite my friends come to the party.


 * My opinion essay **

The famous people have a right to privacy?

The famous people are interesting on the media and general public. The most people want to know about their private life and spend a lot of time to follow them. It made the media has a lot of profit from celebrity magazine, TV show and online. So, this essay will describe why the famous people don’t deserve privacy.

Celebrity can’t be famous without publicity. In fact, celebrity need publicity to be well knows about them because if the famous people who were to be interested of the media, it can make them to more famous. So, the media wizard has a good reputation. Furthermore, the famous people have chosen a public career. Before their come to be famous, they could have been another career like the general public such as teacher, accountant, businessperson or etc. but it’s impossible because they come to be the famous people.

In addition, celebrity can use fame to get special treatment. For example, if the clothing store, jewellery, party invitations, lots or something like that give their products to celebrities for use it or invited the celebrity to be presenter. It mean, their can help to promote the products of that shop because the most people want to be famous. So, they will follow what the celebrities do. It made they feel like famous people. Furthermore, some people trust and need to support the celebrities who they like. Overall of the reasons, it made more benefit for celebrities and the company each other. However, the famous want positive of fame. They can share their photo and interviews on private life but sometimes they don’t like negative publicity for present the bad side of them.

In conclusion, the famous people no right to privacy. They need the publicity to be well known about them but not all the times because the publicity part of being famous and their can get more benefit from the media. It’s impossible, if you are the famous people. You will keep off interested in by the media. Finally, the people who choose a public career need to expect a lack of privacy.