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Hi Hank, hope your exam preparation is going well. I can’t find a second exam from you to mark, so I’ll just have to give you general feedback. You have good essay structure and planning, so be sure to paraphrase and reword the topic.

P16 Write a short paragraph stating who you agree with 80 words I agree that technology is good for students. For example, students can get more information they need by the internet. They can learn how to search for the information they need by themselves. It can also let some people who work from nine to five, to use their free time to learn online. Students must be more interesting in learning with technology.

P58 Write 5 sentences about your city Taipei 101 is the tallest skyscraper around the world. The antiquities, where National Palace Museum collection, is more precious than Beijing. The Taipei 101’s lift is the fastest in the world. Tainan Confucius Temple is the oldest Confucius Temple in Taiwan. Many years ago, Kaohsiung Harbor is the most important harbor in the world.

P72 Write a paragraph about your dream house My dream house is big, modern , high-technology and it must be a green house. First, I want my house has a swimming pool. Because I very like swimming. And I hope each room can be big enough to make people feel comfortable. Second, I hope that I can contort any electrical by voice, like TV, air conditioning, computer and refrigerator. Finally, I want it’s decorated very modern. It will make of steel and cement. There have solar power on the roof. It will save electricity. The most important is, it will be designed as a green house. I hope I can stay the house like this in my future, and it will be very great for me.

P69 Plan and Write a paragraph

The semi-underground is a kind of special houses in Lanyu, where local in Taiwan. The weather in there is very windy because it’s an island. In summer, there have many typhoons. In winter, its have very strong Northeast wind season. So they built the house under ground, only the roof exposed. This design let the wind just blew the roof. The house is cool in summer and warm in winter. It’s made of stone. And this designed will be suit for the weather in this island.

Dear Mr. Bhavinder Thank you for your ask about our Business English course. I will give you some information about that. The course is for five weeks and two hours a day. The teacher can teach in the BTI bank. Prepare a big room, please. If you have any question, you can send an e-mail for me or give me a phone call, my phone number is 9788 7986. Kind regards, Bjorm Donaldson Helix Language School

P119 Opinion Essay

Many people are very interested in famous people. They spend a lot of money and time for that. The media makes billions of dollars from celebrity magazines, TV shows and websites. There are the reasons why I think famous people should not expect privacy.

Firstly, people can’t become famous without publicity. Also, celebrities need publicity to be well known. If the media didn’t report the famous people, they will be forgetting. Celebrities, in order to keep famous. They try anyway to make the media attention or they will become a nobody. So, they use any way to keep famous like the star making some topics to make attention.

Secondly, I believe that the celebrities should be glad to give up their privacy because they can get all of the benefits. For example, celebrities are paid huge amounts of money and enjoy a life of luxury that rest of us could never dream about. They can have very expensive food, wear clothes which designers give them for free. Because, there many products are invited them to speak, they can take the free product and make money.

In conclusion, it is my belief that many people are interested in famous people lives. Celebrities actually like all the attention they get from the media because it helps their careers. The public do have a right to know about their lives and ordinary people will always be fascinated by them.

P25 Write a summary about Jose P28 Write a summary about yourself P33 Write a story P65 Rewrite sentences

The graph shows how many exercise machines broke down each month from January 2009 to July 2009. From January to March, the number of machines which was needed to be fixed was not change so much. It still kept the number between 33 and 37. But it suddenly rose to a very high number in April. The numbers of the machine had been broken downs were up to 77, it’s the highest in these six month. However, it’s had a change for the better that go back to 33 in May. And it’s slightly down in final two month. It was the lowest number in the graph. It only had 12 and 14 machines have broke down. In conclusion, this graph can let us very carefully to know the exercise machine breakdowns from January to July.