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 * Hi William, good luck in the exam Friday. Here is the final draft of your Graph Description. **

This graph shows how many exercise machine breakdowns Gymtastic Fitness club had between January and July 2009. Overall, there was a steady fall in breakdowns from 33 in January to 14 in July.

Breakdowns increased steadily from 33 in January to 37 in February, but in March, breakdowns decreased slightly to 35. However, in April there was a dramatic increase in the number of breakdowns to a peak of 75. Between April and May breakdowns fell steeply back to 33. There was a sharp decrease from 33 to 12 in June. Then, the trend increased slightly to 14 in July.

In conclusion, there was a steady decrease from January to July in Gymtastic Fitness club, with April being the highest maintenance period.

Hi William, hope your preparations for your writing exam are going well. You have a lot of good ideas and have done this task with the right attitude. To improve your writing, you must do some basic things, such as using capital letters and punctuation properly. Also, follow the exam structure (intro, paragraph 1, paragraph 2, conclusion) or you will spend too long writing an unnecessary third paragraph.

Women are better drivers than men Now, driving a  car is a common skill in life. Everyday people drive a car to go to work or for business, so it becomes necessary, whether men or women . Recently, public debate has begun discussing  accidents in traffic, they find some surprising data that men are less safe than women. I have three reasons to prove women are better drivers than men. (why three? Task asks for two, so write two)

First reason is, women have good temper and patient. When men drive car who always talking by portable phone and watch anywhere, they cannot concentrate spirit, because men have big pressure from jobs, family and society. For example, they maybe complain his boss give him without good salaries, bad feeling will cause accident.

Second reason is, drunken for drive just from men not women. Survey statistics from scientist reveal 80% of drunk driver from men. Beer and Vodka will make men so exciting, driving fast, do not care traffic rules, next thing will be happened that is accident.

Third reason is, women did not have perfect drive skills, so when women drive car always carefully than men, women like drives car slowly, concentrate spirit, every time drives seriously, Men like adventure, they have rich confidence for good technique, but always make trouble. for instance my elder-sister is better driver than me.

In conclusion, according to three reasons, I believe women are better drivers than men, car not only belong to man but also for women, maybe women have more talent with drive than men.

P16 Write a short paragraph stating who you agree with 80 words I agree with technology is good for student. First, “digital revolution in the classroom” was a real story, The writer went to Flowerdale school found every student has Pc, they can use computers to do a lot of things. About study, Can use computers open eyes, technology make world become small, Can share happy news with others. Computers can give people a chance to study even if you are disabilies, all these to prove technology is useful active, can make society develop, can make difficult become easy. But computer sometimes can make people become lazy, indulge computer games, cannot concentrate spirit, waste time and money. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Everything have two-sides. One good side and one negative side. We must to check which on have big percent, not only from one side to see. For example, if knife used by killer, we never can’t use knife, it is incredible, I think problem not from knife, it is come from people. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">So “not allow computers and technology in classroom, because student need to study,” it is wrong.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">P22 Write an email <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Dear Mr Bhavinder <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Thanks for your enquiring to Helix Language school. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Helix Language school now can offer business writing classes that It is include write E-mail, faxes,letters,memos regularly. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Friday from 2pm until 5pm. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Total fee is 350dollars/5 weeks, our school just located in Flinderstreet 137#. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Please call me when you see this message if you can, on 0452191023 or send an e-mail to me. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Kind regards <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Bjorn Donaldson <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Helix Language school.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">P25 Write a summary about Jose <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Jose studied in a small high school. The school has more than one hundred students only. Jose was not a good student who never concentrate spirit on class. His favourite subject was music and nautral science. His favourite teacher is Ms Harrison. She had red hair, she taught mathematics. She got Jose interestsed in music. Jose had many friends but Don vargess was best. He is drummer. Jose has a music band in school. The school concert was his big memory.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">P28 Write a summary about yourself <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">When I was in higeh school, it was a happy time. I was lived in school with classmates. After lesson we played basketball, football, tennis, and rid bicycle to travlling, went gym for exercise, sometimes act volunteer to clean street, to help old people cross road, went to hospital to help patient.I have a good English teacher, he was strict and focus on pronunciation. Always introduced humors English movie to us. I think that was reason why I like English so much.it is a pity that He just taught us two weeks and transfer to another city.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">P33 Write a story <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">First time Ride bicycle <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">There was an interested thing happened in my period of childhood. When I was seven years old, I was lived in a big yard that lot of people lived there. I had many little friends. Tim was my best friend of them.Tim’s father was a profiteer. He always spend little money bought old bicycles back cleaned, repaired, looks like new one and high price saled out. He was richest man in our yard at that time. His temper not good that he always angry for anything. It was Sunday afternoon, weather was very hot, Tim’s father drunk a lot white wine and sleep under shady place. Tim and me rode one new bicycle that just made up by his father. I rode bicycle and Tim push it behind me, we sang song loudly, laughing, faster and faster, suddenly one stopped car happened infront of me. Crash!! I slept on earth five minutes don’t know everything. Tim’s head was broken and bicycle damaged seriously, when we pushed broken cycle came bake on the road, Tim imaginary his father became cried.Finally, Tim’s father not only angry but also taught us how to rode bicycle.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">P58 Write 5 sentences about your city <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">1, There are two tallest building in shanghai, one is Jing Mao mansion, another is World trade centre. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">2, five years ago Jing Mao mansion was tallest buiding in shanghai before World trade centre completed. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">3, World trade centre was 50 meters higher than Jing Mao mansion. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">4, Shang hai’s buiding is higher than another city. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">5, the Jing An temple is oldest building in our city.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">P65 Rewrite sentences

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">a we send the plans to the client. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">b we give the client an estimate. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">c the client give answer to us. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">d we send the council the plans for approval. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">e we take the plans to the builder.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">P69 Plan and Write a paragraph <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">traditional house of Shang Hai <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Shang hai is a big city in China. It is becoming the Financial Centre in Asia. If a city needs to develop quickly, It must abandon many backward things, for example, Shang Hai’s Traditional houses are some of them. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">For a start, Shang hai’s traditional houses were built in last Century. They were made of wood and iron, normally with two floors these houses have simple shape, with a dormer-window on the top of house, Several generations live in each small house with no kitchen, toilet, or privacy. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Traditional house do not smell fresh, but they are dark and moist, with mice always eating the food, people make noise disturb their neighbourhood just because traditional houses are made of woodenboards. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">Traditional houses have dangerous electric wires, it is no running water inside, it is inconvenient, traditional houses look awful out-of-date. <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">so the Shang hai government decided to dismantle Traditional houses and built new apartment instead.

<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 24px;">P72 Write a paragraph about your dream house

<span style="font-family: 'Cambria','serif'; font-size: 24px;">My deaming house

<span style="font-family: 'Cambria','serif'; font-size: 24px;">I hope I will have a big house in the countryside, a large farm belong to me. The house made of wood and reinforce glasses, in the night I can see star on the sky just through glasses of house. I want to plant a lot of flowers around my house, to plant many kinds of vegetables, fruits, sometimes far away city and noise it is a good filling. <span style="font-family: 'Cambria','serif'; font-size: 24px;">I need two servants, one is cooking for meal, another one just buy everything that we need. <span style="font-family: 'Cambria','serif'; font-size: 24px;">I like raise animals for example chicken, dog, sheep, in the morning I will ride horse go outsid