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 * Hi Zohoor, good luck in the exam Friday. Here is the final draft of your Graph Description. **


 * The graph shows the number of exercise machine breakdowns each month between January and July. Overall, there was a dramatic fluctuation in breakdowns from January to July. **


 * From January to February the breakdowns increased slightly from 33 to 37, but from February to March there was a slight fall from 37 to 35. **


 * From March to April breakdowns rose rapidly from 35 to 75. However, there was a sharp fall in machine breakdowns from April to June with 33 and 12 breakdowns in May and June respectively. In addition, June was the lowest period for breakdowns. Finally, July increased slightly to 14 breakdowns. **


 * In conclusion, the number of machine breakdowns fell between April and July. **

Hi Zohoor, hope your preparations for your writing exam are going well. You must use capitals at the beginning of sentences and use punctuation at appropriate times. Also, make sure you follow the Essay Structure very, very carefully, paying attention to paragraphs and discourse markers.


 * Is online learning is better than learning in classroom? **

Online learning is defined as technology based learning. Lecture, homework, quizzes and also exams are delivered almost entirely or completely online so online learning has benefits for example doing an online course allows the classroom to be in your own home, otherwise a traditional student should go to school. I think online learning is better than learning in classroom because of two reasons.

Firstly students are finding online learning easier. For example if any students are ill ,then they can still connecting with class without effecting their education or grade.

Secondly being an online student allows more time so it helps a busy people to doing their activity such as sits with family and trying to find time to make money. In addition, they do not have to stress about taking everything in, in short amount of time , actually they always have 24 hours to connect with their class so they do not lost anything about attitude.

In conclusion ,online learning is better and helpful than learning in a classroom, in short, time is the main issues that many people face when decide to go to college.

My name is Zohoor, I'm 22 years old, I'm married and pregnant and the birth of baby will be after three month. I was live in Riyadh in Saudi Arabia, where is the capital city, it has a skyscrapers, which is built by prince Alwaleed bin talal. Is name kingdom tower.

My name is Zohoor. I'm 22 years old, married and pregnant, and will give birth to my baby in three months. I was living in Riyadh in Saudi Arabia, which is the capital city. It has a very big skyscraper, which is named the Kingdom Tower, was built by Prince Al waleed bin talal.

I have studied diploma in IT and after graduated I get a job for one year so, while scholarship coming I was quit because I want to complete my study so I choice AU because I heard it have several nationalities so many culture.

I have studied a diploma in IT and I got a job for one year after I graduated. So, when my scholarship came along I quit because I want to complete my study. I chose Australia because I heard it has several nationalities and is multicultural.

Finally at the moment I study English for one year thin, I will get bachelor for two years. I hope to complete to get master and PHD.

Finally, I am studying English for one year, then, I will apply for a bachelor's degree for two years. I hope to complete this to get master and PHD.


 * P:16 **
 * In my opinion, I agree with the author of "digital revolution in the classroom" because of many reasons . **
 * The first reason is these computers will help student to prepare from pre-school to university, (for example they use word processing software to complete their assignment and spreadsheet to complete data etc.). **
 * The second reason the distance learning programs allow people who can't attend a school or university to study wherever and whenever they choose, (for example the doctors and lawyers, who work from nine to five or people work 12 hour a day can study online in their own time). **


 * p:22 **
 * Dear Mrs Nadia **


 * Thank you for your acceptant me to working with you, I hope to make you proud from my work and me.**


 * Thanks, **
 * Zohoor. **

Please read the task and do it again P: 28 My school was in Riyadh in kingdom of Saudi Arabia, shape was very modern. I was an excellent student inadition I love mathematic and biologic science,The favourite teacher is the teacher of biologic science her name is kholod. My friends were all of class, while breakfast break we are all sits together, we were around seventeen girls I love these sweet days, but after graduate we separated and I just kept with one of them. p:58 The kingdom tower is the highest tower in Riyadh. The kingdom tower is shorter than Taipei 101. The kingdom tower has the best shop in Riyadh. The kingdom tower has the most expensive shop. The kingdom tower taller than alfisalia tower. p:65 __ We send the client the plans. __ -We send the plans to the client. __ We give an estimate to the clients. __ -We give the clients an estimate. __ The client gives us an answer. __ -The client gives an answer to us. __ We send the plans to the council for approval. __ -We send the council the plans for approval. __ We take the builder the plans. __ -We take the plans from the builder. p69: Saudi Arabian houses are have many sizes. The first is they are have tow sizes ,big and small the big is prefer from a lot of families. Inadition ,the small prefer from small families.

The second the houses made of reinforced concrete and iron. That why they are strong houses.

The houses consists of two or three storeys because they have big families and the house should have garden in yard.

P:72 My dream house would have a big swimming pool because the weather is hot in summer so we can enjoy.

I would like to live in a modern house ,which is made of concrete and glass, concrete make it strong and glass make it light house.

I would like to have a small house with very big beautiful garden. ---


 * Melbourne and Riyadh are both medium sized cities. While there are many similarities between them, there are also a lot of differences. This essay will examine some of the comparisons and contrasts that can be identified between these two cities. **


 * There are several similarities between Melbourne and Riyadh. The first similarity they both have large population. For example, Melbourne city has approximately 3 million people, which is the same as the population in Riyadh. Secondly, they both have tall buildings and skyscrapers. Riyadh is famous for Kingdom Tower, while Melbourne has Skydeck. Finally, both cities have many shops and malls, such as Harbour Town in Melbourne and Sahara Mall in Riyadh. **


 * Although there are some similarities, there are a lot of differences. The main contrast between them is public transport. With trains, trams and buses Melbourne has more public transport than Riyadh. The second difference is the weather, which in Melbourne is quite different to the weather in Riyadh. Melbourne is much more rainy than Riyadh. The official languages are another point of difference. In Melbourne, the first language is English, but in Riyadh people mostly speak Arabic. **


 * In conclusion, both cities have some similarities and a number of differences. The similarities are both countries have large populations, tall buildings, shops and malls. However, the differences are that Melbourne has more public transport, different language and is more rainy than Riyadh. Ultimately, both cities are unique and popular with tourists. **