Takky


 * Hi Takky, good luck in the exam Friday. Here is the final draft of your Graph Description. **

The graph shows the amount of exercise machine breakdowns each month starting from January until July 2009. Overall, there was a moderate fall in exercise machine breakdown numbers from 33 in January to 14 in July.

From January to February, there was a gradual increase in the number of breakdowns from 33 to 37, which fell slightly to 35 in March. From March to April, the number of breakdowns increased dramatically where it peaked at 75. After that, between April and June, the number of breakdowns fell sharply from 75 to the lowest point at 12. From June to July, the number of exercise machine breakdowns rose ever so slightly to 14 breakdowns.

In conclusion, the number of exercise machine breakdowns fell between January and July 2009.

P16 Write a short paragraph stating who you agree with 80 words I agree with Jerry Scale, because the computer has many interesting things to do. For example, |(verb + ing) games, watching videos, listening to music, chatting online, (conjunction) surfing the internet or another program. Today, a lot of students have no discipline. They like to play computer games in the classroom and they like to surf the internet, but they don't like to search for information __ about the education __. They like to chat with their friends instead. The result is many students don't have responsibility __and not smart__. Some students usually play computer games all night. Then when they come to school, they feel sleepy, which makes students who have no concentration to learn.

P28 Write a summary about yourself My name is Takky. I’m 22 years old. I was born in Bangkok, the capital of Thailand. I am only one child in my family. I like to play snooker with my friends. In my free time I like to listening to music and surfing the internet. I am a student. Now I study at RMIT English Worldwide. After I finish the English course, I will study Bachelor degree in Business Logistic at RMIT university. When I was studied in high school, I studied in science and mathematics it was very difficult. I was not a good student. I did not have concentrate to learn. Sometime I did not come to classroom. I usually played football with my friends in the afternoon and played cards in the classroom. I did not have any favourite subject, because I did not enjoy studying. Finally, I was lucky. I was graduated in high school.

P58 Write 5 sentences about your city

1.) The Baiyok Tower is the highest building in Thailand.

2.) The Siam Paragon is more luxury than The Central World.

3.) The CP Tower is older than The Asok Tower.

4.) The Asok Tower is higher than The CP Tower.

5.) Dusit Thani Hotel is the most popular hotel in Bangkok.

P65 Rewrite sentences

1.) We send the plans to the client. 2.) We give the clients an estimate. 3.) The client gives an answer to us. 4.) We send the plans to the council for approval. 5.) We take the plans to the builder.

P22 Write an email

P25 Write a summary about Jose

P33 Write a story

P69 Plan and Write a paragraph

P72 Write a paragraph about your dream house

Opinion essay

Do famous people have a right to privacy?

Today, a lot of people are interested in celebrities. They like reading celebrity magazines, watching TV shows and surfing the internet. They want to know about the private lives of famous people. I believe that famous people should have privacy for two main reasons.

The first reason is, celebrities can’t be famous with out publicity. In my opinion, I think the celebrities need publicity to be well known. For example, when they are __on__ media people will know them from __many__ media, but if they don’t have any publicity, they won’t become famous. Furthermore, famous people have chosen a public career. For instance, when they were young, before they came to be famous, they could have been teacher, accountant or businessperson.

The second reason is, the celebrities use fame to get special treatment. For instance, the super models have to wear very nice clothes and jewellery from famous designer for free because they want them to promote their products. In addition, stars want positives of fame but not negatives. For example, they like to share photos and interviews on private life in positives things but they don’t like negative publicity.

In conclusion, the famous people no right to privacy. In my opinion, they want the private lives but they want the publicity too, because the publicity are part of being famous its have many benefits of being well-known. Finally, people who choose a public career need to expect a lack of privacy.