cecilia


 * Hi Cecilia, good luck in the exam Friday. Here is the final draft of your Graph Description. **

The line chart shows how many machine breakdowns there were from January to July in 2009. Overall, there was a sharp fall from January to April, but after this peak, the number of decreased sharply until July.

From January to March, there was no real charge in number of breakdowns with 33, 37 and 35 respectively. The number of exercise machine breakdowns was at its highest in April. However, this fell gradually to approximately twelve, this is a fantastic result because all old machines were replaced in June. The June figure was the lowest for the period. In July the number had a little fluctuate to around 14.

In conclusion, the amount of exercise machine breakdowns fell significantly after April.

= = = = Hi Cecilia, hope your preparations for your writing exam are going well. You are very good at writing, but make some important mistakes with word form and prepositions. Most importantly, make sure you follow the Essay Structure very, very carefully, paying attention to paragraphs and discourse markers. = =

= = Women are better drivers than men. = = Now, = = In contemporary society there are  more and more professions where  women are better thanor  equal to  men. Maybe some people think that males always stronger than female in different fields, because men usually lead to everything in the past. However, nowadays women are better at doing  many things than men, for example driving . (where is your thesis statement?)

= = The first reason is that, in my opinion, woman drivers are better safe than men. Many men usually driver fast are pressed for time, which is very dangerous. Drunk driving lend to many deaths, which the kind of things usually appeared in the male body. And than many taxi drivers like drive fast car on the road with other taxi drivers compete business. Drive fast car not only to themselves no safe but also to pedestrian very dangerous.

= = <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 21px;">On the other hand, women’s car is clean than men. Many people smoking lead on the car’s air is very bad especially men. Women usually clean their car and than dress up to their car. The he let many people prefer sit their car.

= = <span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman','serif'; font-size: 21px;">Overall it is my belief that women are better drivers than men. Because women not only friendly to guest but also carefully to everything. = =

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In my opinion, the digital revolution in the classroom is very view. Some people think that technology affects study for students and wastes their time. However, today's technology is used too much in education because surfing the Internet too much by computer. The first reason is that, surfing the Internet for education purposes is convenient and has too much knowledge. The way to improve our English ability have a big help in surfing the Internet have some websites for example BBC. Anther reason, the technology not only to study have help but also have too much entertainment can make the students too relaxed. Because they work hard most of the time.

P28 My schoolday

** I remember I keen on math in high school. Because our math teacher very friendly and helpful. She usually told us some to study ways and skills, so my math scores always very well. **
===** On schooldays, I really very happy, have many friends with me together study shopping play games. Overall I think school life helped I to learn to be more skills, for example study communication and let me have more responsible. The helped us to develop good habits early in life, I really miss my schooldays. **===

Good work, Cecelia! Keep it up

P25 Jose’s schooldays

Jose Sanchez went to high school, where a small school in the country was only had 100 students. When Jose was a student he study is not very good. But he best favourite subjects were music and science, because he favourite teacher was Ms Harrison got him interested in music. And then Joes had many friends, he best friend was Don Vangess in high school. Now, Joes become a singer, his best friend Don become a drummer.

P65

a. We send the client the plans. We send the plans to the clients.

b. We give an estimate to the clients. We give the clients an estimate.

c. The client gives us an answer. The client gives an answer to us.

d. We send the plans to the council for approval. We send the council for approval to the plans.

e. We take the builder the plans. We take the plans from the builder.

P22 Write an email P33 Write a story P58 Write 5 sentences about your city P72 Write a paragraph about your dream house

<span style="font-family: arial,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 27px;"> P69 Describe a house in your country

<span style="font-family: arial,helvetica,sans-serif; font-size: 27px;">Quadrangle dwelling are a traditional and classical house for the Chinese of northern china. Many people prefer this type of house because it is very comfortable. The reason to live in quadrangle dwellings has four families like a big family very comfortable. These areas house have some special materials, which woods stones and crystals. Furthermore, northern china is very cold, but quadrangle dwellings are a kind of warm in winter and cool in summer house. Outside environment really clean and have fresh air. Finally, quadrangle dwellings are convenient. There have four large house is connect and have different people live here. The relationship between the people and more better.

Women are better drivers than men.

Now, more and more professions women are better equal than men. Maybe some people think that male always strong than female in different fields, because men usually lead to every thing in the past. However, nowadays women are better do many things than men, for example driver.

The first reason is that, in my opinion, woman drivers are better safe than men. Many men usually driver fast are pressed for time, which is very dangerous. Drunk driving lend to many deaths, which the kind of things usually appeared in the male body. And than many taxi drivers like drive fast car on the road with other taxi drivers compete business. Drive fast car not only to themselves no safe but also to pedestrian very dangerous.

On the other hand, women’s car is clean than men. Many people smoking lead on the car’s air is very bad especially men. Women usually clean their car and than dress up to their car. The he let many people prefer sit their car.

Overall it is my belief that women are better drivers than men. Because women not only friendly to guest but also carefully to everything.

The line chart shows the number of machine breakdowns were there from January to July in 2009. Overall there was a sharp fall from January to April but since April the number of decreased sharply to July.

From January to March, no real charge in number of breakdowns with 30 37 and 35 respectively. The number of exercise machine breakdowns was at their highest in April. But fell gradually to approximately twelve, this is a fantastic result because all old machines replaced in June. The June figure was the lowest for the period. In July the number had a little fluctuate to around 14.

In conclusion, the amount of exercise machine breakdowns was fell April after.

Beijing and Melbourne are both modern, vibrant city. This essay will compare some of the similarities and differences that can be understand between these two cities in the north and south hemisphere respectively.

Beijing and Melbourne are similar in a number of ways. Firstly they are both large cities in both hemispheres with varied landscapes. They both have next to sea and then their harbours of these countries are famous. In addition, their economies is very developed and the per people consumption level is very high. To illustrate this, in both cities people prefer bought many famous brands. Finally, both cities people to thinking and wear clothing are very fashionable; because they usually are brave innovation do any things. For example, Melbourne has created lesson in primary school, it can be improve students’ imagination, develop people creativity from their childhood.

However, on the other hand, these cities are opposite. First of all, Melbourne’s climate is milder than Beijing. In fact, Melbourne’s climate is not only mild but also dry, while Beijing’s climate is very dry there are often have dust storms. It is very cool in winters with temperatures of down to -10 ℃. Secondly Beijing has a much larger population than Melbourne. To illustrate, Beijing’s population is ten times as large as the population of Melbourne, which one of the most important reasons is china’s large population. Last but nor least, they have different religions beliefs. Melbourne’s religion is Christianity, whereas Beijing has a major religions is Buddhism.

To different countries’ city, dissimilar ways have a large proportion. For example, first about season, when is winter in Melbourne, it is summer in Beijing. Next both cities have many different cultures. Last to race Beijing is yellow race, whereas Melbourne is white people. In conclusion, the essay has highlighted the compare between these two cities.