Eason


 * Hi Eason, good luck in the exam Friday. Here is the final draft of your Graph Description. **

This graph shows how many exercise machines broke down between January and July 2009.

First, there was an obvious change between January and July. There was a steady change from January to March. The number kept about 35. However, from March to April, there was a sharp rise from about 35 to around 75. It reached the highest point. We can see clearly that there was a sharp fall in the next two months. In June, breakdowns were at their lowest about 10.At last, there was a gradual rise to about 12.

In conclusion, exercise machine breakdowns fell between January and July.

Hi Eason. Well done on completing most of your homework. I haven’t corrected much of it because it wasn’t finished in time. I read your practice essay on famous people, which is well planned despite being quite similar to the others. However, I can’t find your second essay and this makes it difficult to give feedback.

P10 my profile

My name is Chen sha. But, nobody know Chen sha here. If someday or somewhere, someone call me Chen sha, so I believe that I have come back to China .Now, everyone call me Eason. According to the usual practice, I should introduce my family.Ok,i don't want to break practices. There are four members in my family. Except my parents ,I have a sister ,everyone think we are not same at all. Because of my sister is beautiful,haveing a good-looking face. But sometimes, when I see the mirror, I am still satisfied with myself.

Now i have a small dream, I hope that i can speak English well, and i can understand Ken clearly when he speaks to me.

P28 Write a summary about yourself

First of all, I will talk about education in China before I tell my schooldays. I think the education of China is unsuccessful. Teachers only use the traditional ways to teach students. Every student lose the happiness when he step into school. Every student have a lot of pressure. Above i said, i express my dissatisfaction.

But ,it is very strange, my schooldays are very relaxed. Maybe the reason is that i always think ways to relax myself. In my memory, I always remember a teacher who cares me .I respect him very much. Of course, I have a lot of friends. They company with me ,give me happiness, bring me smile. They are the important part of my life. I believe that they are the most valuable memory and wealth to me.

P58 Write 5 sentences about your city

1.Bird's nest is the most important symbol of Beijing Olympic games.

2.Great wall is one of the oldest buildings in China.

3.The water cube has the largest swimming pool in China.

4.The Oriental Pearl is taller than any tower in Shang Hai

5.The Beijing library is the largest library in China.

P65 Rewrite sentences

We send the plans to client.

We give the clients an estimate.

The client gives an answer to us.

We send the council the plans for approval.

We take the plans to builder.

P72 Write a paragraph about your dream house

I don’t need a house which is very large and beautiful. I just need a comfortable house where my honey is. I want my house like that which appear in the story. There is a river near my house. The river is clear to see the bottom. I need a garden in the front of house. There is a very tall and old tree in the garden. Lots of animals are running and jumping in the tree. Everyday, when the sun moves to west, the warm sunshine cover the house ,that’s very pretty. The feeling ,I can’t express. when the sky is black, the star is white, my honey, my babies and me , we enjoy the happy time in the house. This is my dream house.

P22 write an email Dear Mr Bhavinder: Thank you for choosing the Helix Language school. We can set up a Business English class for you. Every course has 5 weeks. It will take 2 hours every day. It you have any question, you can send an email to me, or you can call me .My mobile phone number is 97887986.I am always at your service. Kind regards. Bjorn Donaldson Helix Language school P25 write a story of José’ schooldays Jose is a maous singer. Recently, he published new personal album, which called schooldays. He enjoyed his schooldays very much, when he was a student. His small high school, which there was only 100 students, was located in a country. He thought that he was not a good student. His favourite subjects were music and science, and his favourite teacher was Ms Harrison, who taught him maths. Ms Harrison got him interested in music. He has lots of friends, the best one is Don Vargess.His schooldays leave him a happy memory. P69 plan and write a paragraph. Everyone should still remember 2008 Olympic Games held in Beijing. The bird's nest is main stadium. The stadium looks like a bird's nest. The Beijing Olympic Games puts forward the green Olympics. So the designer worked out the bird's nest. The bird's nest is made of steel. Although I have been to the bird's nest, I can imagine the bird can hold near 100000 people. It is very grand. Every Chinese feel proud of it, it has became the symbol of Beijing, when people see the bird's nest on TV or Internet, and people know it in Beijing, in China.

P33 write a story I have forgotten a lot of the past. But I can still remember that day what happened. In fact, that day is my 19th birthday, I did not tell anyone before. I thought everyone ignore that day. I was as usual. A day would be over, my phone rang. I picked up my phone, it was my mom. She said," I have book a birthday cake, in a minute, someone will send the cake to your school, don’t forget to take. Now, you are in University, your father and me can not accompany you to have a birthday, just you can have a happy birthday with your students.” When my mother said all the words, I understand a lot of things suddenly. In the world, the person who loves you most is always your parents. They can not ignore you forever.

P16 write a short paragraph

I agree with Haruka Kaneko.Today is the age of technology. Everyone should know how to use a computer, how to search the information on the Internet. People can use computer to help them do a lot of tings. They can learn on Internet, have a business meeting, and do some shopping. I think digital revolution makes our lives more convenient. People should use the positives of computer.

In past, many people can not access education.Now, people who need help; they can access education at home by the Internet. Sometimes, the computer can help people know the world better. I think people can change our world by computer, make our world better.